Thread:Walking On Sunshine/@comment-26345967-20200105195452/@comment-26345967-20200105213410

If you don't mind Sunshine, I have a request:

I was looking up the pages of the main Cures and I noticed that one of them have some rather excessive and unnecessarily long information on her personality category, when compared to every other Cure and is quite repetitive. That Cure is Miyuki aka Cure Happy. I decided to rearrange and shorten it dramatically while retaining the key information. Unfortunately, I couldn't edit the page and I'm abit worried about the grammar in the new personality synopisis for her. If it's okay with you since you helped me with previous edits, can you please update it with this while making sure it's grammatically correct? Here it is:

"Miyuki is a bright, kindhearted, and very energetic girl who loves fairy tales. She is always happy and optimistic, making her seem innocent but ocassionaly naive. She’s also really clumsy into the point she occasionally ends up hurting herself in process when she gets overexcited such as hitting her head after falling back. A few running gags in the series is how Miyuki tends falls flat on her face after she randomly trips and always gets hit in the face by random objects such as Candy and Pop’s storybook.

It was revealed that during her childhood, she was a very timid, quiet, and shy girl who was too afraid to interact with others. She would often read storybooks to console herself until Tae, her grandmother, gave her a mirror and tell her to always put a smile on her face in front of it and an encounter with a mysterious girl will result in her becoming who she is now. Although cheerful for the most part, she still showed notable signs of nervousness such as her class introduction, being on stage for the fashion concert, and finding the Akanbe frightening in her first battle. However, she gains confidence in her abilities and develops courage over time and her enthusiasm, motivation, and determination often help her to lead the other Cures in battle.

As she loves fairy tales, Miyuki's favorite pastime is reading storybooks and is shown to be well informed in folklore and literature. The reason she loves fairy tales is because the happy endings to these stories always leave a warm and happy feeling inside her heart, which she summarizes as a feeling of being "ultra happy!", making her cherish happiness and smiles in high regard. She hates seeing others being sad or crying and does her best to cheer them up when they do. She eventually realize what her happiness own was and wishes to share that kindness and feeling with others."

Anyway, thank you so much for your time.