Thread:CureHibiki/@comment-28968981-20170316153419/@comment-26868869-20170317033413

Hey, sorry for butting in, but I have a question regarding Beauty of truth. I saw your translation back then and while it's fun to sing along the tune, I was a bit confused by some points, so I asked my friend who lived in japan to translate em for me again.

It's almost complete, they only need to translate Gamettsu's speech in the middle where he is like "look at my strength, I am truly number one ;)".

Some of these translations are a bit more clear about the meaning, so I wonder if we could merge them to fit. Like Sparda calling Batty cheeky, "I'm the real deal, and I won't be beaten! So fight me fair and square! Shall we finish this before the sunrise? This battle of beauty"; "True beauty is so finely crafted (Of the highest quality~)";

"Which of us is more beautiful?" instead of "Which one is it? Well you ain't beautiful!"

"There's no holding back!" instead of "You cannot go anywhere now!"

"Who won this battle of beauty?" instead of "That is the true beauty of victory and defeat" and the very final part is different in meaning - your translation implies a friendlier tone, while the meaning is more along the lines of them being rivals. "I'll never hand over the title of 'most beautiful' to you" instead of " True beauty is the one thing that will go unnoticed".