Thread:CureHibiki/@comment-24680684-20180908040243/@comment-24680684-20181229052355

Can I get some help? I'm translating some lyrics for a Metal Heroes song and there a stanza that's giveing me trouble.

Now, I've already translated it.....but it doesn't look right.

Thanks

陽は沈み又昇るよ この星のどんな 町にも 着なれた上着脱ぎ捨てるように 若さをほどくのさ

Hi wa shizumi mata noboru yo Kono hoshi no donna machi ni mo Kinareta uwagi nugisuteru you ni Wakasa wo hodoku no sa

Above this town is a star that

Rises and falls like the sun

Throwing off the jacket that I've grown accustomed to wearing

My youth has began to unravel