Thread:FairySina/@comment-32182601-20171229202050

Hi, so the wiki won't let me post my reply on my wall so I'll try here instead.

I really liked the story! And you're really good at writing casual conversation! But who are these 130+ years people, are they vampires? xD Is it okay if I point something out? I think it would be easier to know who's talking if you formatted conversation like this instead:

“Mike’s not strict with me. He’s just Mike.”, Tim says while pouting. “Okay good, if you go then I can go back to sleep.”

“I’ve been wondering anyway. It’s your vacation and you are up early. Tim. It’s 9:00 am.” Nancy starts to laugh as Tim lets out a sigh.

“I originally thought I’d organize everything today. But then Mike said he’d do it."

See what I mean?^^

Also, yay! We finally got our internet back! After 17 days... 