Thread:FairySina/@comment-32182601-20171229202050/@comment-32182601-20171229204509

I had to restart my iPad for it to work. Weird. Haha, what a great thread name! xD

Oh, that's an interesting concept. So you mean the story got came to life and wanted to be more than just a fanseries ^^

I hoped you take it like that. I always want more elaborated feedback than "it was good", so I hoped you thought the same.

About that, you wrote calm or calmly very often in the story, so you might want to replace some of them.

Should we continue here or go back to the the thread on my wall?