Thread:CureHibiki/@comment-24680684-20180908040243/@comment-25034020-20181231021104

I too think if Precure was just dubbed normally like any other show is nowadays, then it would be more popular and people would be going nuts over it.

Woah this is a difficult passage to translate. I decided to translate the lines on their own, so no flow just to figure out what's going on because I did compare your translate and it did seem like you changed it slightly. So here's the accurate line by line English translation and then beneath is a better version that flows.

''The sun rises and sets again and again In any town of this star Taking off my jacket that I've grown accustomed to wearing My youth will unravel.''

Okay a better version:

''The sun will keep rising and setting Above whatever town that star touches My youth begins to unravel when I take off my jacket I had grown accustomed to wearing''

I mean, my version isn't much better either because jesus, that stanza/passage/thing was a challenge XD