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I would think no less. But now we have somewhat of an outline to follow at least, instead of it being completely original.

I haven't really written anything else than the opening scene, but I have a couple ideas. I've also compiled a list of what we've planned so far, which I'll put at the bottom of the post.

can you have Ayaka as a last name tho?

Sounds good to me. I remember how odd I thought it was to just introduce one villain at a time and then suddenly everybody was invited to the party and how annoyed I was over not seeing the big boss and their world earlier.

Here's the list: (warning, it is pretty big)

Ideas for KiraPika Precure:


 * My opening scene


 * Ichika is an annoying neighbor, she sneaks into the KiraPati kitchen to bake when the staff is busy and almost sets the kitchen on fire, she then becomes friends with them and gets lessons from them and help out.


 * "Bibury saves the day", the episode that introduces Ichika. While Ciel, Himari and Pikario are out shopping ingredients, Bibury watches the bakery. She discovers Ichika first when she hears the smoke alarm and smells smoke, and uses an extinguisher to extinguish the fire. The kitchen is covered in soot, and when the others come back, Ichika fervently trying to clean it, while Bibury sits back eating the burnt cookies. Pikario scolds her and they begin to fight. The End.


 * Parfait (whose hair is now blonde in Cure form) is the one who saves Pikario (who still starts off as Julio). He then sleeps the "sleeping dead" for about 7 episodes. Every episode after his "death", the girls bake extremely many sweets and collect as much Kirakiraru as possible, hoping to be able to resurrect him.


 * In the first episode, Pulupulu drains their pudding and says "Thanks to that guy, I'm finally able to have this Kirakiraru all for myself!" hinting at Julio.


 * The thieves are: Pulupulu, Maquillon, Cookacookie and Gummy. The girls purify Gummy at the end of ep 4, and he tells them about Julio and their brainwashing.


 * In ep 5 they fight the rest of the thieves. Julio watches them from afar, but isn't introduced until the next ep as Rio.


 * Ciel doesn't want to talk about what happened with Pikario, and so, since she knows that Pekorin and Jaba would ask about him if they knew she was Kirarin, she keeps her real identity a secret until episode 9 or 10, where she from exhaustion transforms back into Kirarin in front of them. She then finally tells them about Pikario's disappearance, and his redemption arc starts. When he recognizes his sister in school and the one helping the Cure and therefore is his enemy, he starts going crazy and, thanks to Noir, goes berserk ep 22 or 23.


 * Aoi: They meet and help Aoi similarly to how they did in canon.


 * Yukari and Akira: Two regulars that they often talk to and that sometimes offer to help out. Yukira is going canon somewhere in the first half (Ciel and Himari helps them get together).


 * Bibury and her backstory is the same, but is put much more focus on over all.


 * Exploration of the Cures' doubts when not being able to fight and defeat Grave nor their family and friends turned Nendos. They try to break the masks but realize it's futile as Grave instantly restores them. With the help of Bibury and Pikario they try to fight Grave off, but they don't succed. The Cures almost falls into despair, thinking they're not strong enough, but thanks to their friends, they realize they are and gain their Super forms.


 * Give a better look at Grave's backstory, and he isn't defeated right after his backstory is revealed. When he comes back for a final fight, he's almost defeated when he gets saved by...


 * Diable. When he's weakened by the Cures, Grave uses him to power up his car and himself. After doing that, the two becomes connected through their Kirakiraru, so if one dies, the other one dies too. Noir warns Diable about this, and so Diable saves Grave to save himself.


 * Noir and Lumière's story gets two focus episodes. Noir sits in the dark world, thinking back to how everything started: When he meets Lumiere he falls in love with her and her kindness, and he demands her to only make sweets with Kirakiraru for him. When she refuses, a demon from the magical world appears and take the opportunity to take control over Noir, and make him evil.


 * The fights will be a mix of Mahou Tsukai's and KiraKira's. They will mostly use KiraKira's fighting style, but is more tactical about it.


 * Explain Kirakiraru's functions.


 * Sometimes "teach the kids that just eating sweets isn't healthy".


 * Show Himari's parents and relatives. Her father is a zookeeper, her big brother studies far away and her mother ? Since everyone always is away from home, this causes Himari to feel lonely, and because of that studies sweets so intensely.


 * Use the animal theme more in the girls' everyday life and in the fights. (Could for example go to the zoo and learn more about their respective animals)

In a magical world, he was born special, needing kirakiraru to live. It's his life source, and if he doesn't consume it, he dies. When he meets Lumiere he falls in love with her and her kindness, and he demands her to only make sweets with Kirakiraru for him. When she refuses, a demon from the magical world appears and take the opportunity to take control over Noir, and make him evil. Noir would be from, one of many, magical worlds, who make war with another world. He was born weak needing Kirakiraru to live, but also strong with special abilities. When the war was over, Noir's nation had won (he had been at the frontlines of it (since he had thise special abilities), there of the "horrible things" he said he'd done), and to avenge their loss, this demon from the opposing nation tries to take over this powerful source (Noir).
 * Noir's reason for wanting the Kirakiraru:


 * Name for the dark world: The Insipid Void


 * Name for those fighting for Noir: Los Espejos


 * Grave's real name: Garland Malcolm


 * Lumière's real name: Sakura (Ayaka?)


 * Pikario: Gets kinda Cure-like magical powers/abilities


 * Villains interact earlier, show the world earlier.