Thread:Squirrel Is Cute/@comment-6078077-20171120194908/@comment-6078077-20180203162139

Yeah I randomly found the anime today and remembered I wanted to watch it. I was scared of the first episode where the jerk main possessed a girl and did fanservice-y thing but I'm glad that is one anime with a main character without fanservice aspects. The main is also growing onto me. In episode one I'd loved him to get rid by a truck but by now... he isn't that bad anymore.

Okay, good x'D Sometimes language just feels like "what that?" to me xD Even German. If you don't mind, would you like to be some kind of beta reader for me? Like you read over it and correct it and/or tell me what I could correct. Not only grammar but also content and stuff. I've been writing stories like Sky or Secret Story for about 4 (Sky) or 7 (Secret Story) on my own and... no one really gave me opinions back. So after Sky was criticised for being rushed and not very loveable, I realized I had to change stuff. In order to prevent something like that to repeat itself, I wanted people to help me develop my stories better (I even was going to list them as the Sky team: Hibiki helps me with Japanese, I do the whole other stuff, Alumi (another user) gave me ideas before, etc.). However - except for Hibiki of course - no one actually came to help me soo....

//bows// I really want to improve my work but for that I need help.