Sorry if the edit I made was unnecessary. For some reason, whenever I edit, I sometimes tend to be apprehensive in wether the information was sufficient, up to the standards of the wiki, appropriate, accurate, or so forth, hence the page earlier. Again, I'm sorry.
It's OK. It's just that sometimes more simpler and easy to understand words are better than bigger ones. If you do that too much, it makes it look too flowery. Besides, sometimes you could be using the word in the wrong context, or it doesn't end up meaning what you think it means. I just like to have things easier to understand for readers.
I was looking up the pages of the main Cures and I noticed that one of them have some rather excessive and unnecessarily long information on her personality category, when compared to every other Cure and is quite repetitive. That Cure is Miyuki aka Cure Happy. I decided to rearrange and shorten it dramatically while retaining the key information. Unfortunately, I couldn't edit the page and I'm abit worried about the grammar in the new personality synopisis for her. If it's okay with you since you helped me with previous edits, can you please update it with this while making sure it's grammatically correct? Here it is:
"Miyuki is a bright, kindhearted, and very energetic girl who loves fairy tales. She is always happy and optimistic, making her seem innocent but ocassionaly naive. She’s also really clumsy into the point she occasionally ends up hurting herself in process when she gets overexcited such as hitting her head after falling back. A few running gags in the series is how Miyuki tends falls flat on her face after she randomly trips and always gets hit in the face by random objects such as Candy and Pop’s storybook.
It was revealed that during her childhood, she was a very timid, quiet, and shy girl who was too afraid to interact with others. She would often read storybooks to console herself until Tae, her grandmother, gave her a mirror and tell her to always put a smile on her face in front of it and an encounter with a mysterious girl will result in her becoming who she is now. Although cheerful for the most part, she still showed notable signs of nervousness such as her class introduction, being on stage for the fashion concert, and finding the Akanbe frightening in her first battle. However, she gains confidence in her abilities and develops courage over time and her enthusiasm, motivation, and determination often help her to lead the other Cures in battle.
As she loves fairy tales, Miyuki's favorite pastime is reading storybooks and is shown to be well informed in folklore and literature. The reason she loves fairy tales is because the happy endings to these stories always leave a warm and happy feeling inside her heart, which she summarizes as a feeling of being "ultra happy!", making her cherish happiness and smiles in high regard. She hates seeing others being sad or crying and does her best to cheer them up when they do. She eventually realize what her happiness own was and wishes to share that kindness and feeling with others."
The page is currently locked because I'm finishing up the infoboxes on the Smile Cures I did a few years back and will be unlocked once they're added, which should be within the next day or so. I'll add what you put and will change up a few things if you don't mind.
However, from what it seems using the header visual and only really describing Cure Grace's look isn't the best idea to me atleast, as since unlike other season we do have the girl's civillian forms so maybe we should add that to the appearance section at least? Because her page is locked I can't add it.
I think if you want add the civilian forms on the page, please go ahead and make a version of your above image with a white bg. The cutout looks like a lot of work, but I'd prefer transparents from official sources.
Hi, are you still using the cutout image for the white bg version? There must be an original version of the image that doesnt have a scribbly surrounding? What was the original pic that you found like?